Revision for a research paper on OLD MAN AND SEA
When the teacher sent the paper back requesting revisions, here is what he said:
1. Take out the things about the other books.
2. So what he wants is to STICK to the book itself.
– add more details from the book in order to make the point and to prove the thesis.
– add more QUOTES from the book.
– link everything back to the thesis statement.
3. And make length be 9-10 pages.
Check the attached file for additional revisions that are needed.